Skeleton Dance: A Book Review

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This short story was an absolute gem. C. Jai Ferry’s dark writing took us into a relationship that was more than dysfunctional. It was toxic. It told the tale of a teenager who had come to live with her eccentric, cruel grandmother. As you are probably aware good first lines and first paragraphs are something I look for in books and Ferry hooked me from the start with her opening line which read, “My Grandmother wanted to kill me.”

The struggle between the child and grandmother was expertly captured from the teenagers perspective. It put you in the place and in the middle of the conflicts over fried eggs, halloween costumes and ballet. The ending was unexpected.

The back story to this story was also included in the book and I enjoyed reading that almost as much as I enjoyed reading the story. I was not surprised it had won a competition first prize and that it has since been made into a play that has been performed. I’d love to buy a copy of that as I have to do a play reading at toastmasters and this I think would be perfect.

Would I recommend this book – I certainly would and I look forward to reading more of C. Jai Ferry’s collections of short stories.

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Weekend Coffee Share 11th March 2018

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It seems like ages since I have participated in a weekend coffee share. It feels good to be back and you are welcome so come on in for a cuppa – tea? coffee? and lets have a chat.

If we were having coffee I’d tell you that I returned from my cruise to Papua New Guinea with a chest infection/asthma/flu – I didn’t go to the doctor for diagnosis assuming that I would get better and although not 100% I seem to be over the worst of it and this week I started all my normal activities again – yoga and dancing, book club and art appreciation, toastmasters and of course my office work – writing and photographs.

If we were having coffee I’d tell you that the cruise was good but not as good as the one to New Zealand. Having lived in a similar society I found Papua New Guinea depressing as even the cities were in poverty struck states with begging common (at least whilst the cruise ship was in town). Last year they apparently had 14 ships visit and this year 10. Two of the destinations we were scheduled to go are not going to be included in future trips. We didn’t get into Madang due to an anthrax outbreak. Apart from the ships I don’t think there is any tourism and there isn’t a lot of evidence of industries starting. Of course there was evidence of exploitation. The Taiwanese fishing boats were there in force with refrigerated ships, helicopters to spot the shoals of tuna and wahoo and small boats that went and netted these entire shoals. I don’t think the local people have any understanding at the dire consequences of this over fishing.

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There was many beautiful or interesting sights as well and the boat was a well behaved crowd. Most had some connection with Papua New Guinea whether from the war or having lived there before independence. Any way it is time to move on – I am doing enough posts during the week on the trip not to take up all the time here.

If we were having coffee I’d tell you that on the boat we used the gym every day so on our return we decided to buy an exercise bike so we could continue once back home. The contraption we bought turned out to be an instrument of torture. For the first time my muscles hurt and I have certainly worked up a sweat. Perhaps on the ship I didn’t because it was airconditioned but the effort now is so much greater. Lets hope it gets me fit. If it does it will be worth it.

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If we were having coffee I’d tell you that Roger and I both have had birthdays – mine today – so Mum took us out to lunch. It was a miserable day

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but that didn’t matter as we stayed nice and dry and ate what I consider to be the best food in Noosa.

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We then went for a drive to look at the big surfs and then came home and walked the dogs in the rain. A perfect day.

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Enough about me.  How was your week? Has your weather been warmer/colder, wetter/drier. Have you read any good books or seen any good films?  Thank you for dropping in for coffee, it is lovely to see you. Thanks to  eclecticali  who is our host of the weekend coffee share.

 

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Project Mogul: 99 Word Flash Fiction

Vernon poked at the colourful wreckage that covered a large area of their paddock in New Mexico. “Dad, whadya reckon this is?” 

“Dunno. Gather it up. We’ll take it to the Sheriff.”  They bundled the bright rubber strips, tinfoil, sticks and paper and drove them to Roswell.

Sherriff Wilcox scratched his head before passing it to Colonel Blanchard who passed it on to his superior in Texas. Marcel, sent to examine the paddock knew it was their high altitude spy balloon that would warn of Russian nuclear testing.

1947 –  a time of paranoia – he said  “We have found a UFO.”

In response to Charli’s prompt where she asks:

March 8, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that features a balloon. It can be a party balloon or a hot air balloon. How does it add to your story? Go where the prompt leads.

Respond by March 13, 2018, to be included in the compilation (published March 14). Rules are here. All writers are welcome!

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The Beehive: Silent Sunday

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Dialogue in Memoir

A guest post I did over at Carrot Ranch on the subject of memoir.

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Sightseeing: Six Sentence Stories

The child lay unmoving as the two men paddled closer and closer. They seemed anxious and I wondered if the child needed medical help. The men gesticulated as did the crew on the huge liner they were now very close to. The crew was clearly telling the outrigger they were in danger and to move away but the men paid no heed. I was now convinced they needed help when the child craned his neck to get a good view of the large boat . It was just a day of sightseeing for the local folk.

Thank you to Zoe who is hosting SSS for the last time. Although a relative newcomer I have enjoyed the prompts you have given and the stories generated by these. Next week we are off to Denise who will be putting out the next prompt on Sunday.

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Wintry: Thursday’s Special

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It doesn’t need a thermometer to know when it feels wintry. Sometimes when it is wintry in my heart I don’t feel anything, A fog descends. Luckily that doesn’t happen often but even in Australia on a summer’s day if the weather is windy, raining with a white sky I’ll be heard to say, “it feels like a winter’s day” or if winter is round the corner, “its turned.”

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But white skies, white snow, a wet miserable feel, is wintry the world over – whether it is in New Zealand

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or Greenland

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or in England.

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They all feel wintry.

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This one makes me feel more than wintry – it makes me feel Siberian  despite being taken in Switzerland.

In response to Paula’s prompt.

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Skywatch Friday: 9th March 2018 Noosa Spit, 2.48pm

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For skywatch Friday

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Betel Nut Story: Weekly Photo Challenge

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In response to Weekly photo Challenge

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The Warning: Friday Fictioneers

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Jemma  looked at the pollarded trees and the rock piles. “Pollards and cairns together. I wonder if we’re being warned about passing through this lock.”

“Don’t be stupid. People put them there to let others know they’ve  passed this way too.” 

“I can’t tell whether they’re old or new…. whether I should be sad, worried, or adding my own. I’m off – you can pick me up further along.” 

Red lights flashed as the lock filled. “Help,” Peter cried ” The rudder’s caught in the gate.” Unable to rise with the water the boat swamped and sank.

“Worried and sad,” Jemma whispered.

Thank you to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for hosting Friday Fictioneers and also a thank you to Sandra Crook for supplying the photo used for the prompt.

 

 

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