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What I found particularly interesting about East of the Mountains by David Guterson was that from the very beginning we knew that the character Dr Ben Givens, suffering from bowel cancer, was going home with his dogs to hunt birds for the last time and shoot himself. A retired heart surgeon Givens wanted to have quality of life over quantity of life but he was determined that his suicide would look like an accident. Despite the novels predictability it was compelling and a book that was difficult to put down.
This was largely due to the evocative descriptions of place (Washington State) that Guterson wrote in eloquent prose. “He passed the night in a wood of fir trees close to the Skykomish River. It was dense, dark and silent there, wet and uninviting. But in the early morning he rose from dreams to find the river pale and lovely, mist steaming off its waters, the fog thick on its distant bank, and he went down in the cold dawn light to wash his face at a riffle, where he saw a kingfisher flash by.”
Rather than plot driven this novel was a journey both backward and forward with some small climactic episodes from the present to move Ben Givens further on his external journey whilst the reader has the benefit of experiencing both the external and internal journey.
Would I recommend this book – yes. I thought it was a beautiful life journey with vivid imagery that allowed me to smell the apples, see the mountains and rivers and hear the war. I have not read Snow Falling on Cedars and although I believe it too has wonderful description of place the story is very different. I have had it on my book shelf for at least 10 years (that tall pile of books to be read) and I know that it has moved up the pile and will soon be read.

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I am a reasonably observant person and was stunned the other day when I saw some flowers I’d never seen before. I posted these in Floral Friday asking if anybody knew what they were. No-one did and Sharon suggested that perhaps I was playing a joke. It got me thinking – perhaps someone had attached them as Christmas decoration to the tree and the laugh was on me. I returned to check it out. Along the way I saw some other flowers I’d not seen before with this seed pod being one.

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that had started life

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with small yellow flowers before the long seed pod formed.

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Then I saw these little fellows. Were these how my flower had started and what appropriate colouring for a flower at Christmas time. I looked to see if I could find what they morphed into.

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and found on a different tree what could certainly have been the end of the plant I was looking for.

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And found some conclusive evidence. The dried dead remains along with a couple that were still in their live glorious state.

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The bush went high and it was obvious their time was almost done as those higher up were of the dead dried variety.

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Spiders found them attractive.

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I compared the leaf and concluded that my two flowers had no relationship to each other apart from their habitat at the waters edge.

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Another flower

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and the same variety dried and near the end.

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Then I came across my tree from the other day. There were no old flowers on this one and the flowers climbed high on spindly lichen covered branches.

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A close up of the attachment shows it was nature not man that put it here.

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So were they real. Most definitely they are and now I have two trees I would like to identify not just the one with the waxy red hat covering an olive like ball.
Crushing, celebrating crowds filled the foreshore. Multicoloured glo-sticks made it seem as though finally, I’d found the end of the rainbow. I was sitting in it. Laughter rang out amidst the hum of chatter. It was awhile before countdown to New Year would begin and the fireworks would explode in the night sky.
“What’s up with you Gemma?”
“Nothing. Why?”
“You’re the only glum face here that why.” Peter stared at me but I turned my eyes heavenward searching the storm clouds that obliterated the stars.
“I want to make a New Years wish but my star isn’t there.”
In response to Charli’s prompt :
December 28, 2017 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about a wishing star. It can be central to the story or used in a different way. You can have a character interact or not. Go where the prompt leads.
Respond by January 2, 2018 to be included in the compilation (published January 3). Rules are here. All writers are welcome!
New Year is upon us and I hope everyone will have a very Happy New Year and that it brings to fruition those dreams you have been turning into reality. It has been a wonderful year at Carrot Ranch with the weekly 99 word prompts, the Rodeo (the first competition held by the ranch in the month of November) and the publishing of our first anthology – a compilation of 99 word flashes, some longer flash fiction pieces and essays, and a section on teaching flash fiction as an art form.
HAPPY NEW YEAR

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photo by Manu Sanchez via Unsplash
“My generation had it the best; post war, a life of peace, labour saving devices, no need to lock the back door or for helicopter parenting. Simple pleasures. Those were the days. No soldiers mingling in the crowds” “But Ma, you didn’t have a mobile phone!”
In response to Sonya’s prompt

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Is it a bird, Is it a plane, No its an ultralight.

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In response to sky watch Friday where skies from round the world can be seen.

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“I tell you, Johnsonn told me he was in love.”
“Don’t believe it. He’s never even spoken to a girl. He’s in that cycling group that wear their tight lycras and walk around with their bums sticking out. They’re all blokes and when he’s not doing that he just listens to music. Alone. I just don’t believe it.”
“We’ll soon know. He told us he’d introduce us tonight.” Marnie and Jack walked arm in arm to the soccer field where Johnsonn had said he’d meet them with Betsy. It was pitch black until they heard Johnsonn’s cry, “Meet Betsy.”
In response to Rochelle’s prompt for Friday Fictioneers with a photo courtesy of Ted Strutz. Thank you both.

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Walking along the river bank I noticed the flower on a tree. Insignificant and wouldn’t have been noticed had I not been fixated on the patterns in the reeds that the wind had blown to shore. Next time I will take a photo of the tree itself. Does anyone know what it is? The flowers are waxy.
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