
© irene waters 2016
People smile and say gud day
Friends gather, some picnic by the river
Others whisper secrets
Laughter everywhere.
The man with the frown, mouth drooping
Out of place
Met friends
Arms surround
He must have lost his mate.

© irene waters 2016
Old people abound
slowly on walkers, some with shuffling gait
Make their way
carefully along the uneven paths
They can still delight in their surrounds
their sight river bound
to where the children play
laughing gaily on the sand

© irene waters 2016
Lots of puppies,
Using the same paths as the many bicycles.
Fitness fanatics and those who only dream
of bodies they will never see.
This place is a nice place to be
One it seems that one can be
whatever it is they wish to be.
In response to weekly Discover challenge where asked to be an unbiased observer where you live.
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About Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist
I began my working career as a reluctant potato peeler whilst waiting to commence my training as a student nurse. On completion I worked mainly in intensive care/coronary care; finishing my hospital career as clinical nurse educator in intensive care. A life changing period as a resort owner/manager on the island of Tanna in Vanuatu was followed by recovery time as a farmer at Bucca Wauka. Having discovered I was no farmer and vowing never again to own an animal bigger than myself I took on the Barrington General Store. Here we also ran a five star restaurant. Working the shop of a day 7am - 6pm followed by the restaurant until late was surprisingly more stressful than Tanna. On the sale we decided to retire and renovate our house with the help of a builder friend. Now believing we knew everything about building we set to constructing our own house. Just finished a coal mine decided to set up in our backyard. Definitely time to retire we moved to Queensland. I had been writing a manuscript for some time. In the desire to complete this I enrolled in a post grad certificate in creative Industries which I completed 2013. I followed this by doing a Master of Arts by research graduating in 2017. Now I live to write and write to live.
A well written poem on the thoughts of old and young, with the river being the star. :o)
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A poem evocative of where we’ve been, where we’re going, so well expressed, Irene. And the photos as just a bit of a reminder – well done all around.
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Thanks Sharon. 🙂
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A poignant, reflective piece. I love it!
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Thanks Diane. Yes it is all those things and I’m glad you love it. 🙂
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