Friday fictioneers: The Tourist

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© Dee Lovering

The strains of the fair floated merrily across the square where the people sifted through the clothing,ipad cases and souvenirs that the stall vendors offered for sale. The  colourful fruit and vegetables were so attractively displayed they begged to be touched. Swarthy men conned the unwary with the age-old trick of picking the cup under which the seed rested. Unhappily money changed hands. Those weary of shopping ate seafood laden paellas, gazpachos, bougies and tapas. Beer flowed freely. No-one noticed the man climb the pole until he shouted, pointing,  “Here’s the best view of the rooftop of Casa Mila.”

In response to Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers where you are invited in 100 words to give your story which comes on looking at Dee Lovering’s photo.

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About Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist

I began my working career as a reluctant potato peeler whilst waiting to commence my training as a student nurse. On completion I worked mainly in intensive care/coronary care; finishing my hospital career as clinical nurse educator in intensive care. A life changing period as a resort owner/manager on the island of Tanna in Vanuatu was followed by recovery time as a farmer at Bucca Wauka. Having discovered I was no farmer and vowing never again to own an animal bigger than myself I took on the Barrington General Store. Here we also ran a five star restaurant. Working the shop of a day 7am - 6pm followed by the restaurant until late was surprisingly more stressful than Tanna. On the sale we decided to retire and renovate our house with the help of a builder friend. Now believing we knew everything about building we set to constructing our own house. Just finished a coal mine decided to set up in our backyard. Definitely time to retire we moved to Queensland. I had been writing a manuscript for some time. In the desire to complete this I enrolled in a post grad certificate in creative Industries which I completed 2013. I followed this by doing a Master of Arts by research graduating in 2017. Now I live to write and write to live.
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34 Responses to Friday fictioneers: The Tourist

  1. ansumani's avatar ansumani says:

    That’s one athletic man. Intersting twist at the end there.

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  2. Charli Mills's avatar Charli Mills says:

    Ha, ha! I was so sucked into your scene I could taste the paella…then the man on the pole! That’s funny!

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  3. Sandra's avatar Sandra says:

    Nice twist. Beautifully timed.

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  5. Wow, That was quite a climb! Your reference to all the foods really grounded this story. Nice work!

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  6. plaridel's avatar plaridel says:

    you portrayed the scene so well. it reminded me of my visit sometime ago. well done.

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  7. “Here’s the best view of the rooftop of Casa Mila.”
    Now. in a typical open air fair style – did he start to sell tickets to join him at the top?
    Randy

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  8. GHLearner's avatar gahlearner says:

    I want paella now. Great take on the prompt with a surprising twist at the end.

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  9. noelleg44's avatar noelleg44 says:

    Mmmm…paella! Maybe that gave the man the energy to climb the pole!

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  10. Fantastic scene setting.

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  11. Ha, that would be fun, I hope he doesn’t fall.

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  12. Dear Irene,

    I felt like I was there sight, sound and smell. I’ll have to pass on the view. I’m afraid of heights. 😉 Nicely done.

    shalom,

    Rochelle

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  13. My senses have been assailed. Bravo. I hope the pole-climber had his camera with him.

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  14. What a character! I was pulled into the scene, and never saw him climbing. 😉

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