Friday Fictioneers: Refinery Explodes

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Photo Prompt — © marie gail Stratford

The blast started in the catalytic cracking unit of the Exxon refinery. The initial blast unleashed a catastrophic chain of events and further explosions destroyed most of the refinery, killing four people. An investigation into the explosion and safety procedures is underway and pending these investigations the complex will remain closed.

“Lucky you weren’t at work last night. There was an explosion at Exxon.”

“What happened?”

“An explosion.  It shut the refinery and killed four people.”

“Oh no!”

“They probably didn’t feel a thing.”

“No. Not that. It means the price of petrol will rise.”

 

Rochelle asks us to use the PHOTO PROMPT. What thoughts crystallize in your mind? Can you tell the story in a hundred words or less?

 

 

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About Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist

I began my working career as a reluctant potato peeler whilst waiting to commence my training as a student nurse. On completion I worked mainly in intensive care/coronary care; finishing my hospital career as clinical nurse educator in intensive care. A life changing period as a resort owner/manager on the island of Tanna in Vanuatu was followed by recovery time as a farmer at Bucca Wauka. Having discovered I was no farmer and vowing never again to own an animal bigger than myself I took on the Barrington General Store. Here we also ran a five star restaurant. Working the shop of a day 7am - 6pm followed by the restaurant until late was surprisingly more stressful than Tanna. On the sale we decided to retire and renovate our house with the help of a builder friend. Now believing we knew everything about building we set to constructing our own house. Just finished a coal mine decided to set up in our backyard. Definitely time to retire we moved to Queensland. I had been writing a manuscript for some time. In the desire to complete this I enrolled in a post grad certificate in creative Industries which I completed 2013. I followed this by doing a Master of Arts by research graduating in 2017. Now I live to write and write to live.
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27 Responses to Friday Fictioneers: Refinery Explodes

  1. Reckon you’re on a winner, here, Irene. 🙂

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  2. Charli Mills's avatar Charli Mills says:

    I see you are carrying out the compassion (or lack of) theme! When we care less about human lives than prices we have slipped a notch in our humanity. Great writing!

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  3. cindy knoke's avatar cindy knoke says:

    God, tells us who we shouldn’t be doesn’t it!

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  4. Sandra's avatar Sandra says:

    Priorities, priorities. Ironic one Irene.

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  5. Sherri Matthews's avatar Sherri says:

    Ha…just about says it all really. Great flash Irene, and again, fantastic twist at the end, love it 🙂

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  6. Michael B. Fishman's avatar Michael B. Fishman says:

    How can I not love such a cynical character! This was a fun story and you made me stop for a minute and remember that the important things in life aren’t things at all!

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  7. Nan Falkner's avatar Nan Falkner says:

    Dear Irene, Wow, I hope we collectively never take the price of gas as being more important than human lives. Great story! Nan 🙂

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  8. Very poignant in regard to greed. Your story makes us stop and think and ask ourselves what is important to us.

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  9. Irene! How awful, Ypu made me flinch at that ignorant remark.

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  10. Dear Irene,

    So much for compassion, the almighty dollar (or pound) is the bottom line, isn’t it? Love the irony in your story. So true to human nature.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  11. ahtdoucette's avatar ahtdoucette says:

    Oh no! Well, I guess we all have our priorities. 🙂

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  12. I’m afraid that would have been my reaction. Ain’t we just so crass!

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  13. A very truthful account how people set their priorities right.. I will take my bicycle 🙂

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